Yikes! Great job getting out another chapter, and an excellent ending to this one as well. I can’t wait to see what happens in the next. Really great building of tension, as usual, I keep finding that there’s this build to these big scenes, and then by the time we get there, whatever I thought was going to be the biggest issue always ends up being just a small part of something bigger that is going on.
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Yikes! Great job getting out another chapter, and an excellent ending to this one as well. I can’t wait to see what happens in the next. Really great building of tension, as usual, I keep finding that there’s this build to these big scenes, and then by the time we get there, whatever I thought was going to be the biggest issue always ends up being just a small part of something bigger that is going on.
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